Brick9320's New Ghoul App

Posts : 1 Join date : 2013-07-07 Location : Berlin

]Steam Name]:Brick9320
]Steam ID]:STEAM_0:0:23228393

]Desired Creature]:Ghoul

]You will not abuse any of this creature's powers, do you understand?]: Yes I do

]If you are unserious with this creature it will be removed, do you understand?]: Yes I do.

]Explain why you want this creature]: :I always felt bad for ghouls in fallout and have always wanted to experience life the way they do

]Anything special about said creature?]:Immune to Radiation

]Provide a detailed ten line RP example regarding your creature]:
/me Is sitting in his house smoking a cigarette.
/it An Enclave soldier kicks the door in Yelling "Get on the ground!".
/me Attempts reach for his 10mm Pistol.
/it The soldier attempts shoot me in the arm making me drop it.
/me Is shot in the arm, dropping the gun.
/it The soldier attempts to knock me down.
/me is knocked onto the ground.
/it The soldier attempts to shoot me in the head.
/me Is shot in the head dying.
/it The soldier spits on my corpse.
]Extra comments]::
I re-made my RP example

Admin Posts : 6 Join date : 2013-06-09 Location : Virginia

Eh, RP example wasn't great, gonna have to -Support

Posts : 14 Join date : 2013-06-16 Age : 29

It not good when in your rp that you die. Carry it out more. If you are intelligent, so some casual rp as your lines. If you are feral, rp ambushing and attacking a traveler or devouring some guy's flesh or something.

Subject: Re: Brick9320's New Ghoul App Tue Jul 16, 2013 4:14 am

Well, I have to +Support, not much people realize the Enclave will kill you, but he did, and also the fact that not only died while trying to fight, he made it realistic by dying.

Subject: Re: Brick9320's New Ghoul App Wed Jul 17, 2013 2:33 pm

-Support
I have to -Support this application is poorly made.
Roleplay examples are VERY basic,and to basic.
And they arnt long enough for my taste,and lack roleplay.\

-RPSim